I really enjoyed looking at you slideshow! you added lots of detail to your work. you could improve by making sites easier to access and checking grammer. Well done. -Hayley
Thank you for your thoughtful and helpful comments Hayley. It is great to see you commenting on Malia's blog. Keep up the great work. Malia, I really like your photos (especially the ones you made yourself) and the pretty backgrounds you have used (especially the Mihi background). Slide 5 you wrote 'Ect' I think you meant to write etc.
Check this out... Generally, in American English, if "etc." is used in the middle of a sentence, it is followed by a comma. (Tennis, soccer, baseball, etc., are outdoor games.) However, if this word appears at the end of a sentence then the period (which is part of "etc.") serves as the final punctuation mark.Jan 17, 2014
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I really enjoyed looking at you slideshow!
ReplyDeleteyou added lots of detail to your work.
you could improve by making sites easier to access and checking grammer.
Well done. -Hayley
Thank you for your thoughtful and helpful comments Hayley. It is great to see you commenting on Malia's blog. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteMalia, I really like your photos (especially the ones you made yourself) and the pretty backgrounds you have used (especially the Mihi background).
Slide 5 you wrote 'Ect' I think you meant to write etc.
Check this out... Generally, in American English, if "etc." is used in the middle of a sentence, it is followed by a comma. (Tennis, soccer, baseball, etc., are outdoor games.) However, if this word appears at the end of a sentence then the period (which is part of "etc.") serves as the final punctuation mark.Jan 17, 2014